tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4330112758211831911.post1228793755121173763..comments2023-05-23T01:35:30.641-07:00Comments on Sherri Hayes: Sensual Romance With Heart: Another Point of View Anyone? Unknownnoreply@blogger.comBlogger3125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4330112758211831911.post-82989092897096393622014-04-23T21:01:24.116-07:002014-04-23T21:01:24.116-07:00Too many POVs will dilute a story too much. Reader...Too many POVs will dilute a story too much. Readers inherently want to connect to a character or two. Less experienced writers seem to try multiple POVS quite often, but not many experienced writers can pull it off. In a way, the tendency is also on offshoot of what we see on television. A camera shot can switch form character to character relatively smoothly, but it doesn't work nearly as well on the page.JeriWBhttps://www.blogger.com/profile/04560326888524377308noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4330112758211831911.post-51662353538335114372014-04-23T08:37:00.828-07:002014-04-23T08:37:00.828-07:00A very good point, Cara. It really is a matter of ...A very good point, Cara. It really is a matter of finding the right balance.Sherri Hayeshttps://www.blogger.com/profile/00303173531928181614noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-4330112758211831911.post-84082686987417502802014-04-23T03:55:52.373-07:002014-04-23T03:55:52.373-07:00Different points of view add to the depth and unde...Different points of view add to the depth and understanding of a story--to a point, after which more points of view detract from the intimacy because you lose focus on the key players. No romance was every spoiled by limiting POV to the H/h, but veering off to different character has ruined a romance. Who are the key players? Focus on them.Cara Bristolhttp://www.carabristol.comnoreply@blogger.com