Friday, September 27, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - September 27, 2013

This week's picture comes from the stockvault.



She held still, trying not to move as he continued to move his pencil across the page. This was new for her. She hadn’t known what to expect when he’d asked if she would allow him to sketch her.

A part of her, she knew, was hoping for something more sexual. Not that what she was wearing couldn’t be classified as sexy, it could. But aside from showing a little more leg than was decent, she was completely covered.

 “All done.”

Before she could ask, he showed her his sketch, and she couldn’t believe her eyes. Was that really her?
~Written by Sherri Hayes

8 comments:

  1. oh wow, how lovely that she gets to see herself in a different way. Loved this. xx

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  2. Would love to know more. Just who did he draw to make her question like that

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  3. I also would love to know more, really like this. :)

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  4. What happened after he showed her the sketch? How did he create her in his image? I have so many awesome questions. I def am hooked. Great job!

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  5. I, too, would like to know how he saw her! You left us with a cliffhanger!:) xo

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  6. I thought I commented on this already but I thought you left us with a great cliffhanger! It was a fabulous tearse!:) xo

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  7. She was surprised with his rendering. I would like to know what he saw.

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