Friday, December 30, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday - 12-30-11

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?
I stood and watched as the banter continued. They’d been flirting all day, and now they’d agreed to an arm wrestling match.
Each took a position on one side of the picnic table, readying themselves for the impromptu duel. It was completely silly, and over a disagreement on whether or not there should be marshmallows in hot chocolate.
Never in a million years would I have expected this to happen the first time my two best friends met. They were completely opposite, but you’d have to be a fool not to feel the sexual tension coming off those two today.
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19 comments:

  1. Luna Ella AldoraDecember 30, 2011 at 6:17 AM

    I'd have fought over hot chocolate too. *hehe* Oh this will be fun to watch, Sherri! Two best friends making a connection. :)

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  2. Naomi ShawDecember 30, 2011 at 6:22 AM

    Hot to watch. Nice one honey

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  3. Benjamin T. RussellDecember 30, 2011 at 6:29 AM

    I don't know about the "hot" chocolate, but I can think of plenty of creative uses for those marshmallows. I wonder what kind of side bet did they make? Loved it.

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  4. JadeDecember 30, 2011 at 6:35 AM

    I can guess that this is gonna end with lots of chocolate and not necessarily on the marshmallows!
    great post

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  5. Lee BrazilDecember 30, 2011 at 6:37 AM

    lol - great post! Marshmallows are important...

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  6. Davee JonesDecember 30, 2011 at 7:34 AM

    Love at first sight, Love this FFF. Sounds just like something I would do back in Oklahoma. ;)

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  7. ERPDecember 30, 2011 at 8:48 AM

    mmmm hot chocolate <3 Nice post Sherri, loved the friends to lovers :)

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  8. Yvonne NicolasDecember 30, 2011 at 8:55 AM

    Aww, I love this one. They're first time meeting and the fireworks are popping off. He should be happy they like each other. Sweet post.

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  9. gemma parkesDecember 30, 2011 at 9:01 AM

    Mmm! Sexual tension! Great post!

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  10. Bonni S.December 30, 2011 at 9:05 AM

    Love this one and yes, marshmallows are very important in hot chocolate.

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  11. UnknownDecember 30, 2011 at 11:24 AM

    Oh yes, they need to get together! Love it!

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  12. Katie HarperDecember 30, 2011 at 9:07 PM

    Hey! Marshmallows are serious shit!! Don't we all dread introducing two totally opposite friends. They either want to screw each other or screw each other over.

    FANTASTIC POST!!

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  13. Rolling Muse in The RosesDecember 30, 2011 at 9:24 PM

    Mmmm sounds yummy!

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  14. Eden ConnorDecember 30, 2011 at 10:04 PM

    Flash Fiction Foreplay! (chuckle) I want more! *pout*

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  15. S.LiraDecember 31, 2011 at 6:51 AM

    I love sexual tension. Nice!

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  16. VenusBookluvrDecember 31, 2011 at 9:57 AM

    Love that you took this approach to the prompt. Great point of view!

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  17. Author Cyril J. MichaelJanuary 1, 2012 at 12:31 PM

    Great interpretation!! Nice job.

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  18. Sancre Darling aka S.E. DarlingJanuary 2, 2012 at 9:44 AM

    Now see I like this one! Best friends 1st meet and whoaaaa!

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  19. Lisa WorrallJanuary 3, 2012 at 5:26 AM

    Loved it :)

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