Great. Sharp and raw, perfect.
Great hook! I have so many questions! :)
I think one of the most profound of all emotional pains is not when we disappoint ourselves - yes that does hurt, but we're all good at rationalizing. However, when we disappoint and/or let down someone we love, someone we respect, that is an emotional pain that cuts deep.
So much information/many questions conveyed in such short sentences. Nicely done.
Very nicely done! Lots of emotion here! Great six!