Saturday, April 28, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - April 29, 2012

"Shh, Brianna."

It was then I felt the tears. I was crying. He must be so disappointed in me. Even though he didn't sounds angry, I knew he must be.

What if he took me back?



5 comments:

  1. Great hook! I have so many questions! :)

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  2. I think one of the most profound of all emotional pains is not when we disappoint ourselves - yes that does hurt, but we're all good at rationalizing. However, when we disappoint and/or let down someone we love, someone we respect, that is an emotional pain that cuts deep.

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  3. So much information/many questions conveyed in such short sentences. Nicely done.

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  4. Very nicely done! Lots of emotion here! Great six!

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