Thursday, August 23, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - August 24, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday is back.

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He’s promised her a surprise. All she had to do was remove all her clothes and lay on the bed face down. There was soft music playing in the background. He’d told her to relax, and she was doing her best. She was just anxious for whatever it was he had planned.

At the sound of the door opening, she turned her head toward the door. There her husband stood in nothing but a towel that rode low on his hips. “Hi.”

He smiled.


He walked toward her, climbing up on the bed. “Just close your eyes and relax.”

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  1. Oh come on, you can't leave it there, turn it into a longer story. I want to see if the towel falls off *wink* Great flash

  2. Oh, the anticipation, lovely. Love the last line. Think I need to show this one to the hubs :)

  3. Sweet Flasher! I love that you leave us wanting more.

  4. The first time I read this, I thought, oh a threesome.... the husband was joining them. Nicely done

  5. Oh, sounds fun! Wonder if he'll cook dinner for her too? Make a special day of it.