As writers, we’re often tempted to explore every character’s perspective, diving into their thoughts and emotions to create a rich, layered narrative. While multiple points of view (POVs) can add depth and complexity to a story, there comes a point where too many perspectives can backfire.
At a meeting of my local writer's group, we discussed one members story. She's writing fantasy and her current manuscript has eight POVs.
When I heard this a bunch of red flags went off in my head. While I'm not a fantasy genre expert, I do know how difficult it is to write a large number of POVs well.
My first story, it had five POVs. While that didn't make it a bad story, it did create its own set of challenges.
One of the biggest issues with having too many POVs is that it can make it difficult for readers to form strong emotional connection. Readers get invested in characters, especially when they're able to be in those character's heads and experience things from their perspective. They're able to experience the character's struggles, emotions, and motivations first hand. Constantly shifting perspectives can dilute that connection.
Jumping POVs, also known as head hopping, can also be disorienting to the reader. Even if chapters are clearly marked, it can create a disconnect which may lead to confusion or frustration.
Managing so many POVs can all so present pacing challenges. If every character gets equal time, chances are some situations will need to be rehashed multiple times. This slows down the progression of the story and could lead to readers skimming over entire sections, or even DNF'ing the book.
Are there stories out there that do have eight or more POVs? Of course. The first one that comes to mind is Game of Thrones. But it isn't the norm for one simple reason: finding the right balance and doing it well isn't easy.
Finding the right balance is key. For most stories, two or three POVs is all you need. This allows for deeper character development, stronger emotional connections, and a more natural flow to the story.
If you're considering writing a book with five or more POVs, ask yourself if all of those perspectives are truly essential. Are they all driving the story forward? If not, it may be time to rethink whether their POV is really needed.
Amazon has gotten a lot of hate over the years with many groups calling for boycotts for various reasons. The latest boycott movement is being pushed and encouraged in many corners of the book world. Whether or not you agree with the reasons behind the boycott, it does hurt independent authors who rely on Amazon to reach readers and generate income.
The Reality Of Self-Publishing
Let's be frank. Amazon is the big dog when it comes to eBook publishing. Like it or not, more eBooks are sold via Amazon than any of the other online retailers. Amazon provided a platform where independent authors can publish their books without the gatekeeping of traditional publishing. Add that to their global reach, their user friendly tools, and the ease of use, and you can't find a comparable online outlet when it comes to revenue generation for those who've chosen to self publish.
Amazon holds a huge share of the eBook market. Most indie authors make at least 70% of their monthly income from Amazon. Those are the authors who choose to publishing not only on Amazon, but on other platforms as well. Kindle Unlimited authors sell exclusively on Amazon. Their incomes are solely dependent on the platform with the exception of a small amount of paperback and/or audio book sales.
If the last week has shown anything, it's that a good chunk of readers aren't willing to migrate to other online retailers. Amazon doesn't just provide a platform for authors. Readers like it as well. They've made everything easy and seamless. While other retailers like Barnes & Noble, Apple, Kobo, and GooglePlay have a share of the market, they don't have the same customer base and it shows in the numbers.
Unlike some other boycotts, books are only a small portion of Amazon's revenue stream. Books aren't the only way they're making money, so the hit they're going to take is not likely to do them much damage. But the indie author who's counting on that royalty check to pay their mortgage or car payment will.
If you feel strongly about not using Amazon for your book purchases, then what should you do?
A Better Way To Support Authors
1. Buy direct. Many self published authors sell paperbacks directly through their website. Some even sell eBooks and audio books directly via Bookfunnel.
2. Buy from other online retailers. If you don't want to purchase your books on Amazon, there are other alternatives. Simply buying your books on these retailers helps boost visibility and signals to the retailer that they might want to put more time and effort into that aspect of their platform.
3. Leave reviews. While this isn't directly related to Amazon or book sells, reviews are extremely important. And if you're choosing to buy your books from other sources, it becomes even more important. Reader use reviews and word of mouth recommendations to decide on what book they buy next, especially if it's an author they've never heard of before. To an indie author, a reader taking the time to leave a review is incredibly important.
Are you participating in the boycott? If so, how are you continuing to support indie authors?
Two best friends fake date to reach their holiday happily ever after in this first romantic comedy in the Lovelight series.
A pasture of dead trees. A hostile takeover of the Santa barn by a family of raccoons. And shipments that have mysteriously gone missing. Lovelight Farms is not the magical winter wonderland of Stella Bloom’s dreams.
In an effort to save the Christmas tree farm she’s loved since she was a kid, Stella enters a contest with Instagram-famous influencer Evelyn St. James. With the added publicity and the $100,000 cash prize, Stella might just be able to save the farm from its financial woes. There’s just one problem. To make the farm seem like a romantic destination for the holidays, she lied on her application and said she owns Lovelight Farms with her boyfriend. Only…there is no boyfriend.
Enter best friend Luka Peters. He just stopped by for some hot chocolate and somehow got a farm and a serious girlfriend in the process. But fake dating his best friend might be the best Christmas present he’s ever received.
This is a question that comes up a lot with new authors in the self published space. If you're book is going to be traditionally published, either through a small press or with one of the big New York City publishers, they handle ISBNs so you don't need to worry about it. As a self published author, whether you purchase an ISBN for your book is up to you.
First, what is an ISBN?
ISBN stands for International Standard Book Number. It's a unique way for your book to be identified. Multiple books can have the same title, but no two books can have the same ISBN.
If that sounds important, it is. Sort of.
If you're in the US, authors can purchase ISBNs from a company called Bowker (Click HERE to go to the site).
Authors can purchase ISBNs one at a time, in batches of 10, 100, or 1,000. Of course, the more you purchase, the cheaper they are.
But with the rise of self publishing, online retailers have looked for ways to remove the cost barriers of publishing. One of the ways they do that is by offering to provide ISBNs at no charge.
Sounds great, right?
Well, that depends. If you're only publishing on one platform (usually Amazon) and you have no intention of ever publishing on any other platform, then maybe taking the free ISBN is a great option. Who cares what the ISBN is if it's only going to be for sale on Amazon?
But what if you want to publish your book on multiple retailers?
Well, they offer ISBNs as well. When you upload your book, you'll be asked if you want them to assign your book an ISBN or if you have your own. And again, it's free.
This all sounds great, so why would anyone buy an ISBN?
Let's say you decide to publish your book on Amazon, Apple, and Nook. If you decide to go with the free ISBN option offered by the retailers, your book will have a different ISBN on each retailer. On Amazon it will show Amazon as the publisher. On Apple, it will show Apple as the publisher. And on Nook, it will show Barnes and Noble as the publisher.
You get the idea. There's no consistency across all retailers even though it's the same book.
Again, this may not matter to you. But it is important to decide what your long term writing goals are from the start. If you want to try one day for a run at one of the big lists, it might be a good idea to own your ISBN. If you want to build a publishing brand, you may want to have your own ISBN.
If you choose to take the free ISBN, then later decide to purchase your own for whatever reason, you will loose any reviews you've accumulated under the free ISBN. Given how important reviews are and how difficult they can be to get for self published authors, that alone could be a deciding factor.
Personally, I choose to buy my own ISBN. I bought a block of 100 almost 10 years ago and I'm still working my way through them.
It was the right decision for me, but that is something each author will have to decide for themselves.
Before he discovered my age, he uncovered my heart.
Bruised and abused, and victim to a loveless household, I shimmered with new life the moment he found me drowning my sorrows in a lake beneath the stars.
A chance encounter. An unspoken connection.
I was smitten; he was curious.
But, as everyone knew, fate could be decidedly cruel.
Ohio weather—you never quite know what you’re going to get. Just when we thought we might hold onto some warmer temperatures, Mother Nature had other plans. This past weekend was a prime example, serving up a mixture of rain, freezing rain, sleet, and snow. Luckily for me, by the time I needed to head to Tiffin for the Love and Literature event on Saturday, the freezing rain had transitioned to just plain rain. But that didn’t mean the drive was uneventful.
As I made my way to Tiffin, I passed by four accidents, one of which involved a semi-truck that had crossed the median and ended up facing oncoming traffic. While it didn’t look too serious at first glance, the scene was quite different on my return trip. The state highway patrol had the lane blocked off, and a bucket truck was under the overpass. My best guess? The top of the semi must have made contact with the underside of the overpass during the incident.
If the four accidents weren't enough, I encountered another problem—my windshield wiper on the passenger side wasn’t working properly. I noticed a slit in it, and with the rain continuing to fall, this was far from ideal. My GPS showed an Advance Auto Parts in Tiffin that would only add a minute to my journey. Perfect, right? Well, not quite.
When I turned into the parking lot of the store, I discovered it was closed. Brown paper was covering the windows and there was a sign redirecting customers to another location in Freemont. I had no idea how far Freemont was from Tiffin, and I didn’t have time to figure it out.
Navigating through the dreary weather, I finally found Pan Yan Bookstore and a spot to park. After a quick lunch in my vehicle, I headed inside with my books. I had no idea what to expect since I’d never been to the store before, but I was pleasantly surprised. It was a charming little bookstore with tables set up for the attending authors. I got my space organized and prepared to meet readers.
Unfortunately, the weather seemed to keep a lot of people away. Only about 10 readers showed up, which was a bit disappointing considering last year’s event saw a line out the door. Still, it wasn’t a wasted trip. I sold a decent number of books, primarily from my Daniels Brothers series.
With the event over, it was time to tackle the wiper issue. One of the other attending authors let me know Fremont was about 20 minutes away...and in the opposite direction, which meant going there wasn't an option. Luckily, I had to pass through Marion on the way home. It's a decent sized town, so I figured they had to have an Advance Auto Parts or an Auto Zone.
Sure enough, there was an Advance Auto Parts about 3 miles off the highway. I was able to get a set of new wipers and get back on my way.
I finally made it home around 6 p.m. It was a long, eventful day, and I was grateful not to have any major plans on Sunday. I needed a day to recoup!
Despite the weather and all the little hiccups along the way, I’m glad I made it to Tiffin for the Love and Literature event. Meeting readers and connecting with other authors is always a rewarding experience. Plus, every trip seems to come with its own unique set of adventures!
Melody Gallard may be the daughter of music royalty, but her world is far from glamorous. She spends her days restoring old books and avoiding the limelight (one awkward tabloid photo was enough, thanks). But when a producer offers hera lotof money to reunite her mother’s band on live tv, Mel begins to wonder if it’s time to rattle the cage, shake up her quiet life… and see him again. The only other person who could wrangle the rock and roll divas.
Beat Dawkins, the lead singer’s son, is Melody’s opposite—the camera loves him, he could charm the pants off anyone, and his mom isnota potential cult leader. Still, they might have been best friends if not for the legendary feud that broke up the band. When they met as teenagers, Mel felt an instant spark, but it’s nothing compared to the wild, intense attraction that builds as they embark on a madcap mission to convince their mothers to perform one last show.
While dealing with rock star shenanigans, a 24-hour film crew, brawling Santas, and mobs of adoring fans, Mel starts to step out of her comfort zone. With Beat by her side, cheering her on, she’s never felt so understood. But Christmas Eve is fast approaching, and a decades-old scandal is poised to wreck everything—the Steel Birds reunion, their relationships with their mothers, and their newfound love.
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