Even though she was completely clothed, she felt the need to cover herself.
He was huge, taller than Jared or her father. His hair was a dark brown, only a shade darker than his eyes, and he looked dangerous, more dangerous than her husband, and her frightened expression must have been apparent. She closed her eyes tight, willing everything to go away: her memories, her fear, this man before her.
Jan said, “Chris, you have perfect timing.” She walked over to the man and placed her hand on his arm. 
Great six. The first line and the fifth really grabbed me.
ReplyDeleteExcellent start to this snippet! It really sets the stage for what follows. Well done Six!
ReplyDeleteWell written snippet! I'd be interested to know what happens next!
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