Saturday, September 15, 2012

Six Sentence Sunday - September 16, 2012

She backed toward the stairs without thinking. It was then that he noticed her, appraising her from head to foot, and his scrutiny made her uncomfortable. Even though she was completely clothed, she felt the need to cover herself.

He was huge, taller than Jared or her father. His hair was a dark brown, only a shade darker than his eyes, and he looked dangerous, more dangerous than her husband, and her frightened expression must have been apparent. She closed her eyes tight, willing everything to go away: her memories, her fear, this man before her.

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2 comments:

  1. Powerful six, Sherri. I can feel her nervousness. Well done.

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  2. Very emotive, l can feel her angst.

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