Friday, January 25, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - January 25, 2013

Today's picture prompt is from Morguefile free pictures.



She was still in shock over his admission as she sat there on her bed. Was this really going to happen…the moment she’d been waiting for the last five years?
Glancing up, she stared at the light peeking from under the bathroom door. Yes, it was going to happen. The one man she’d dreamt about…the one man she thought she could never have…
The door opened, and his gaze met hers. He smiled, his eyes sparkling with anticipation. She took a deep breathe, and smiled back. Yes, tonight was definitely the night. Her best friend’s brother would finally be hers.  


13 comments:

  1. Woah I see the twist you threw in their at the end that was wonderful. - @QuHarrison

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  2. Aw, I love this. My heart is pounding a little, fabulous pacing and building right to the last line, Sherri. Well done.

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  3. Anticipation is sweet sauce. Dessert will be even better.

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    1. I think that's a garentee, Angelica. lol

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    1. Me too. Five years is a long time to wait.

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  5. Excellent. Just goes to show good things come to those who wait

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  6. That moment finally happened for her. Great excerpt!

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    1. Ah when dreams come true. I hope it lives up to expectations. Great flasher

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