She was still in shock over his admission as she sat there
on her bed. Was this really going to happen…the moment she’d been waiting for the
last five years?
Glancing up, she stared at the light peeking from under the
bathroom door. Yes, it was going to happen. The one man she’d dreamt about…the
one man she thought she could never have…
The door opened, and his gaze met hers. He smiled, his eyes
sparkling with anticipation. She took a deep breathe, and smiled back. Yes,
tonight was definitely the night. Her best friend’s brother would finally be hers.
Woah I see the twist you threw in their at the end that was wonderful. - @QuHarrison
ReplyDeleteThanks, QuHarrison.
DeleteAw, I love this. My heart is pounding a little, fabulous pacing and building right to the last line, Sherri. Well done.
ReplyDeleteThank you. :)
DeleteAnticipation is sweet sauce. Dessert will be even better.
ReplyDeleteI think that's a garentee, Angelica. lol
DeleteSo glad she got what she desired!
ReplyDeleteMe too. Five years is a long time to wait.
DeleteExcellent. Just goes to show good things come to those who wait
ReplyDeleteYes, they most certainly do. :)
DeleteThat moment finally happened for her. Great excerpt!
ReplyDeleteAh when dreams come true. I hope it lives up to expectations. Great flasher
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