Friday, March 22, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - March 22, 2013

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She gazed up the stairs to the large building before her. It was surrounded by clouds, but just enough to make it seem mysterious. She could still make out details in the hefty columns supporting the entryway.

Cautiously, she stepped forward, closer to the staircase. What was it? Where did it come from?

One-by-one she took the stairs higher, closer to the building. Every step felt heavy, but something was compelling her to continue.

When she reached the top, she stood before two large wooden doors void of any knob. As if someone heard her thoughts, the doors suddenly opened.


  1. What did she see? Who or what was inside? This story definitely needs more adding.

  2. Reads like the building is a haunted palace. You captured the mysterious (aura) of this building in the clouds.

  3. Your setting is just as unfamiliar and mysterious as the others! I'm dying to know what brought her here and what she finds!