Friday, October 25, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - October 25, 2013

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“What do you think, my love?”

Liana tilted her head, apprising the couple that had walked into the bar. They’d taken great care with their appearance. The woman wore a black and red corset with a skirt that flared out, stopping an inch below her knees. The man’s outfit was less obvious. His leather pants and black vest wouldn’t attract attention walking down the street even if Halloween wasn’t only days away. They both had a distinct Goth vibe.
The woman turned to her right and laughed. Light glinted off her front fang, and Liana sucked in a breath. “Yes.”

6 comments:

  1. Nice. I love it Sherri. They are out on the prowl. :)

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  2. Yes, indeed. Looks like they are on the prowl for the night. Well done:) xo

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  3. Great flash. You interpreted the picture so well

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  4. Great description. I liked the way you interpreted the picture here. Awesome flash!

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  5. Very well written flash with perfect description

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  6. I wonder what Liana is thinking especially after seeing the woman's fang. Is she curious, does she want to be turned? Does the couple notice Liana as prey or a possible new member? Great flash. I soo want to know more of what happens. Def have me hooked.

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