Friday, November 11, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 11-11-11

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?

“Don’t. Move.”

“I wasn’t…”

“No. You don’t talk either,” he said, his grip increasing around the man’s throat. “I don’t know who you are or what you think you’re doing, but she,” he said, looking down at the woman sleeping peacefully unaware on the bed. “Is mine.”

The man didn’t answer.

“Good. Now. We are going to walk to that door over there, and you are going to walk away. I’m never going to see you again. Understand.”

He dragged the man through the doorway before releasing him, watching him disappear into the night before returning to his sleeping wife.

 

15 comments:

  1. Excellent FFF post. I love the spin you put on the picture.

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  2. Loved it! That was great. Swoon worthy hero!!

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  3. Great post! He let that guy know he's the boss.

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  4. Well, he is a better man than me, because I would have either snapped his neck or shot him with one of Katie Harper's silver bullets. Very good and nicely written.

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  5. now that's a man! Protecting his wife!
    Great post

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  6. Nicely done Sherri. I love a take charge guy.

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  7. Wow, that was powerful. Loved it.

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  8. You don't mess with another man's wife....unless he's holding a camera. Then it's OK.

    GREAT JOB!!! I LOVED IT!!

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  9. Great 100 Sherri! Really enjoyed it!

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  10. Loved it! Loved it! Fantastic FFF :-)

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  11. Now I want to know why that man thought he had a right to be there! But I do love a man that is protective ... wonderful!

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  12. Nice... I have a whole story in my head form your 100 words- Hubby's been MIA- maybe undercover for years, comes home and wife has moved on... and he just kicked out her new BF- :) awesome!

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  13. Gotta love such a protective man. Fabulous FFF!

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  14. Great FFF, It made me wonder if the guy was an intruder or a would-be lover he wife actually expected.

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