Thursday, November 24, 2011

Flash Fiction Friday 11-25-11

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?


He stood after checking to make sure their friend was still alive. “Someone want to tell me what happened?”


Silence. No one volunteering information. They’d been stuck in this mansion for weeks now waiting for details on their next assignment. Everyone was getting restless, but this was unacceptable. Aidan was naked, reeked of alcohol, and had red lipstick kisses covering his torso.


He should have known his men this would happen. “Is she gone?”


“Yes, sir.” He didn’t look up to see who’d answered him.


“Make sure someone stays with him. When he wakes up, send him to my office.”

15 comments:

  1. Someone partied just a little too hard. LOL! Haven't we all been there. Wonderful post. :o)

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  2. oh what a party that must have been... And apparently only one woman was there!! Good for her!
    great post

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  3. Sounds like this woman used her wiles to get away from the men - and having fun doing it too! roflmao Go honey!

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  4. Party much? Looks like he went a bit overboard. Great post.

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  5. party! uh oh. Sounds like Aiden is gonna get his ass handed to him :P

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  6. If I knew if he was a good guy or bad guy, I'd be more inclined to be glad he survived. *LOL* Yay for the woman being gone though!

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  7. Oh dear, who is the woamn with the red lipstck and what did she do to him? 100 is never enough is it!

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  8. I agree. 100 words is never enough.. red lipstick+booze= too much fun!!!. Awesome work. I'm deff following you.. I have a small blog too. Just started! If you want to come by and have a look, go ahead. hope you enjoy my crazy words..
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  9. Time to pay the piper. Excellent post honey!

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  10. Great twist! Love your imagination.

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  11. awww.. i hate missing the party! Great post!

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  12. Great post. Amazing how we all see something different in the same picture.

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