Thursday, March 1, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 3-2-12

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?


The water rippled gently, alerting her to his presence, moments before she felt him behind her. His body was warm and hard, a stark contrast to the soothing feel of the water, and the cool of the rock.

He didn’t speak. Instead, he allowed his hands, his mouth, his body to do the talking for him as he pulled her right leg back and up. His lips descended to place heated kisses on her neck and shoulder. Of its own volition, her back arched, encouraging his attentions. No one could get her this hot and wanting. No one, but him.

10 comments:

  1. the arching of her back put me in mind of a mermaid. Did you mean volition instead of violation? If not, it's a really interesting word choice, and I love it!

    marc nash

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  2. A great flasher. I could sense every ripple of the water, every sensual movement. I loved it

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  3. I loved this. It moved me as descriptively as it did her. I could feel her falling inot his embrace, welcoming the attentions.....:) xo

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  4. "He allowed his hands, his mouth, his body to do the talking for him." That's great. It locks in the passion and frees the mind to explore the wonders of the touch.

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  5. Very sensual post. Your words pulled me into the scene. :o)

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  6. Your description of the whole seen was mesmerizing. I could actually feel that hot sexy body slidding up behind me. Yummy. I love this, so hot and sexy.

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  7. Well, her certainly has the touch, the strong, silent type. Hmmm, he does look kinda of Clark Gable-ish. Sherri, you know how to weave a scene. You reeled me in with your description of this masterful, silent lover and the woman who can't resist his charms. Outstanding.

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  8. Very sensual post Sherri. You drew me right in. Loved it.

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  9. I absolutely loved this one. Great description.

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  10. I know a man like that! Beautiful, hot, sexy post!

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