She felt him before she saw him.
Light was streaming in from beneath the closed door, but other than that the room was dark. She’d tried to adjust her eyes, to get ready for what she knew was coming, but it was useless. This was his territory.
She took a deep breath, waiting.
Suddenly, his body pressed up against her back and his hand came up to cover her mouth. Even though she knew he’d been there, that it’d only been a matter of time, a silent scream died in her throat.
“Did I keep you waiting long?” he whispered.
Damn! Want to know what he was there for? Nice and eerie, gave me chills and left me wanting to know more. Very well done.
ReplyDeleteI need to know more. You have me hooked
ReplyDeleteVery well done ;)
ReplyDeleteChills. You gave me chills.
ReplyDeleteGREAT JOB!!
Very good! Loads of anticipation.
ReplyDeleteA lot of tension in this one. I enjoyed it. :o)
ReplyDeleteGreat build up, very tense, loved it!
ReplyDeleteEdgy, thrilling FFF. I can't decide to fear for her or anticipate a lusty evening.
ReplyDeleteI can't tell if I'm supposed to be scared or turned on... hm.
ReplyDeleteGreat post Sherri.
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*shivers* Sherri, this post made me mostly terrified and partly excited...which is the right emotion?
ReplyDeleteWow! She's awfully calm. I wonder if she knows who he is? Hmm...def have me wondering. Great FFF!
ReplyDeleteOooh a stalker or a boyfriend surprising her. Lovced this one.
ReplyDeleteThe possibilities are endless! Great job.
ReplyDeleteWell done! Fantastic FFF.
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