Thursday, January 26, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 1-27-12

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?
He sat there naked as the day he was born.

She’d left him here, sitting on this metal box, and he didn’t know why. When they’d come here, it was supposed to be something fun for both of them. Now, he wasn’t so sure. He heard noises coming from the rooms around him that didn’t sound all that pleasant. Then again, he couldn’t see anything outside of this room given the lack of windows.

Something rattled outside the door, drawing his attention. The door opened, and there she was; beautiful, sexy, decked out in leather, and holding a riding crop.

18 comments:

  1. Love it! Decked out in leather with a riding crop. :) I am sensing a theme here.

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  2. Oh yeah! That's what I'm talking about!

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  3. Wow, great flasher. I love that idea.

    SLira

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  4. Well done, Sherri. You built it beautifully in so few words.

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  5. hehe, maybe he'll have fun afterall!! I know that I would :)
    Great post!!

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  6. I want to know the next bit! Great flasher

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  7. Uh oh....... things are gonna get to stinging. Nicely done:) xo

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  8. Oh Yeah, when the door open he was secretly glad he decided to take the dare. I just love surprise ending, I suspect he's going to get it in the end too.

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  9. Uh oh, somebody's in for it. Great post. :o)

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  10. Great post Sherri. I felt like yelling "Surprise!" there at the end

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  11. Sounds like someone is about to get a spanking. You all is some kinky devils. LOL. Good six.

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  12. Wow! Think he's in for a huge surprise and a long busy night. :)

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  13. Maybe he bit off more than he can chew. Great flash!

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  14. Think he's about to change his mind very quickly. I have to say the unpleasant noises alarm me a bit. I hope it remains fun!

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