Friday, April 5, 2013

Flash Fiction Friday - April 5, 2013

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He walked into the beach house, taking in his surroundings. The first thing he noticed was the young woman lying on the floor. She wore nothing but a pink, polka-dot bikini. While the color was wrong, the old song filtered to the surface of his mind. Unfortunately, he wasn’t there for a day of fun in the sun.
Crossing the room to where the coroner was looking over the body, he noticed something that sent a chill down his spine. The woman had lipstick smeared haphazardly on her lips…just like the others. Just what they didn’t need---a serial killer.
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  1. You gave me the chills. Perfect tease.

  2. Love this, it reads like a very good black and white movie!

  3. The end caught me by surprise. I never would expect a flash like yours with the woman lying dead in her bikini.

  4. OMG!! WOW!! This was a complete shocker, I loved the way you set this up. Gave me chills. Now I want to know what happened. Great flash!!

  5. Amazing flasher. Jaw dropping. I want to find out whether he gets the killer