Monday, May 18, 2015

#Review - Loving The Senator by Mia Villano

Title: Loving The Senator
Author: Mia Villano
Rating: 2.5 stars

I don't like leaving bad reviews. Really I don't. When I picked up this book I was hoping for a great romance with a slightly taboo feel to it. At the beginning, that's exactly what I thought I was going to get. Unfortunately, my hopes were quickly washed away.

My first issue with the book is the pacing. It started off with a bang, and then...well things just went downhill from there. To be honest, there was very little story in this book. Everything seemed to be focused on getting to the next sex scene. I honestly think if the sex was removed from the book that there wouldn't be much left.

This book also needed a good editor. There were commas all over the place and places that were just outright missing other forms of punctuation such as periods at the end of sentences. 'Perfect' was used to describe almost everything and there were some descriptions that left me feeling somewhat gross.

I could list more but I think it's clear this book didn't work for me. It had potential, but the execution was lacking. This is the first book in a series, and I can definitely say I won't be reading the second book.


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