Friday, January 6, 2012

Flash Fiction Friday - 1-6-12

Flash Fiction Friday. What can you do with only 100 words?

He shifted slightly to the right to get a better angle. “Now tilt your head back just a little.”


“Like this?”


 Her voice sounded like a purr to his ears. “Yes. Perfect,” he said, snapping a few more pictures. “Now slowly remove your jacket. “


The jacket slid down her arms, caressing her skin as it went, revealing the tiny straps of her dress and her pale skin. He was trying very hard to concentrate on what he was doing as the jacket released its finally hold on her arms and fell to the bare floor.

“What's next?” she asked.

17 comments:

  1. Oh come on, what is next??? Great flasher

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  2. I feel the sexual tension beginning to happen. It's beautifully subtle. Nicely done!

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  3. OOh I like it. Shes teasing him. Nice job!

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  4. oh oh... I can see a torrid scene taking place there pretty soon! These two are turning around the bush... Well done!

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  5. Loved the tension Sherri! Subtle.

    E~

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  6. The anticipation is sizzling in this one, Sherri! Will she completely disrobe or keep teasing him? ;)

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  7. Loved this post. I gotta know what's next though.

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  8. What's next?? I'm betting that he asks her to take off the dress and pose for some sexy lingerie photos. Or, he may just ask her to come into his dark room to see his private photo collection. Sherri, nicely done.

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  9. Oh snap! He’s gonna get her down to her birthday suit if he keeps this up. Photographers have a lot power behind that camera because they can make a woman feel sexy, no matter the circumstances. Anything he says do, she’s gonna do it. Hot! Very sexy post!

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  10. Very nice! I can only imagine what both of them are thinking too.

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  11. Yes, what is next? We all want to know. Are they going to get rumpled or is this one big tease? THESE ARE THINGS WE NEED TO KNOW!

    GREAT JOB!

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  12. *Mouth hanging open* You know he's hard. lol Loved it!

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  13. Nice ending, left me curious and wondering what she has in-store for him. :)

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  14. nice FFF, showing the exquisite desire of two people, just waiting to come together. Sexy

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  15. What's next indeed! Poor guy doesn't stand a chance.

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  16. Sherri, I actually wondered if any one else would see this take of the photo. She is gonna be one hot sexy mama during that strip tease!

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